From the feedback I received in class, I revised the the aspects of my pastiche that they thought needed work. Some of these aspects were: the characterization of the main character and more dialogue. I added a part where the main character is talking to herself, actually to the window, but it shows what she is thinking which then makes the theme clearer. I also didn't know where to add more dialogue, but I think that if the main character talks to herself that could account for that. I also feel like that I am lacking a literary element, but over emphasizing the symbol I chose for my pastiche.
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